do u think my poem is good? its not finished yet tho, so comment if u have any suggestions!!!! it is called somewhere there is hope!

by: archie_holds_my_heart

Somewhere there is hope

I look around and all I see is nothing all surrounding me
I seek a place to find a friendly face
Soon there's nothing else for me to look for
Now I'm not even sure
If there is any hope

Now I look around and find that all I see is light
Now I know that there is no need to fright
All I need is to find that door
So that I know that I'm sure
That somewhere there is hope

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