I need help. I can't think of a title and I really need one :p
So last night I had a dream that I didn't get to the ending of and I really wanted to find out what happened so, of course, I started a new book.
Ok here's the gist of it.
10 year old Yoshikazu (Kazu for short) is the youngest in his family with 8 older brothers. But even by his family's standards he isn't normal. Unbeknownst to young Kazu his family has a big secret turned dark.
After making a big mistake Kazu is somewhat confused when two of his brothers tell him that their father want's Kazu to go with them to do "chores."
But when his brother Isamu warns him, once they stopped, that he and their other brother were supposed to kill him he urges Kazu to run. Which he does.
When Kazu finds a lone farmhouse in the middle of nowhere he is quickly taken in by the family living there. But he finds he has a strange connection with the newborn baby they have there.
But secretly it is all a plot by his father. He never wanted Kazu killed but used it as a ruse so that Kazu would be told to run when they stopped in the right area. The only place he would find would be the house with the baby.
Kazu doesn't know but his father and brothers all have powers that they use in their work as assassins. Because Kazu is only 10 he doesn't know yet because his powers wouldn't usually surface till he was 12 or 13.
So I really need a title for this book because it bugs me to see it as "Hey Kazu" in my folder just because that was the first sentence and I figured what the heck I'll just leave it for now.
Any suggestions are appreciated.
Ok here's the gist of it.
10 year old Yoshikazu (Kazu for short) is the youngest in his family with 8 older brothers. But even by his family's standards he isn't normal. Unbeknownst to young Kazu his family has a big secret turned dark.
After making a big mistake Kazu is somewhat confused when two of his brothers tell him that their father want's Kazu to go with them to do "chores."
But when his brother Isamu warns him, once they stopped, that he and their other brother were supposed to kill him he urges Kazu to run. Which he does.
When Kazu finds a lone farmhouse in the middle of nowhere he is quickly taken in by the family living there. But he finds he has a strange connection with the newborn baby they have there.
But secretly it is all a plot by his father. He never wanted Kazu killed but used it as a ruse so that Kazu would be told to run when they stopped in the right area. The only place he would find would be the house with the baby.
Kazu doesn't know but his father and brothers all have powers that they use in their work as assassins. Because Kazu is only 10 he doesn't know yet because his powers wouldn't usually surface till he was 12 or 13.
So I really need a title for this book because it bugs me to see it as "Hey Kazu" in my folder just because that was the first sentence and I figured what the heck I'll just leave it for now.
Any suggestions are appreciated.
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Have you thought of a name yet??
I just went with Kazu :p
Family Assassin?
heres another two:
"the youngest" or
"the run"
hope these help some
The Ninth Brother has potential. Dark Inheritance, Tainted Blood, Children of the Cabal or some mish-mash of like concepts would work if you're looking for something more generic.
I'm pretty sure the ninth brother is already a book. I think I've seen it in my library.
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I dont know, maybe you could call it " The Plot "
I think that's just a bit obvious. I don't plan on having it revealed till farther in the story. I like to have a bit of mystery in the title so that it doesn't give away the whole story but still rings true enough to get people interested.
The Lone Farmhouse?
Kazu's Escape?
The Eighth Brother?
He's actually the 9th. He has 8 older brothers
The Family Secret?
Maybe Hero Kazu?