Some songs that I wrote
Tell me what you think of them. I love getting feedback :)
I want everyone who has ever felt sad or alone to see chapter 5
Song List:
1) Break Down
2) Lies
3) Proud of Me
4) The Good Girl
5) You Are Not Alone
6) The Radio
7) The Survivors
8) Myself
9) The Mask
10) The Fallen Angel
11) Not Giving In
12) Outrage
13) Back Down
14) Tonight
15) Please Stay
16) Never Be You
17) Again
18) I Remember You
19) Our S.O.S.
20) Get Out
21) Thanks for Nothing
Chapter 20
Get Out
Get out,
It’s time for you to go,
You were never even welcome,
So get out of our home!
You’re always lying,
You take things you don’t buy and,
You leave trash wherever you may go,
So it’s time for you to go!
What makes you think we like you?
It’s just we learned to respect,
You never pay for what you eat,
Or what you owe,
So it’s time for you to go!
We weren’t good off without you,
But we were way better then,
We had food to eat,
But not anymore-,
Get out,
It’s time for you to go,
You were never even welcome,
So get out of our home!
What makes you think,
You can lie and make us family?
You can try to lie,
But you’ll never make it past me!
I've dealt with worse,
And believe me you’re not the first,
To be put sic feet down.
You won’t see me shed a tear,
When I put you in the ground!
We all make mistakes,
But you’re the biggest one,
So trust me when I warn you,
You better start to run!
Get out,
It’s time for you to go,
You were never even welcome,
So get out of our home!
We won’t worship the ground you walk on,
So get that through your head,
You can’t order us around,
And if you try you’ll end up Dead!
Is this song making you mad?
You ain’t seen nothing yet,
You talk all big and bad,
But wait till I go Boom!
I’ll blast you six feet under, BAM!
Come at me now,
I dare you to,
I'm calling your bluff,
I'm revealing your lies,
It’s time to pay your dues!
I know what you’re thinking,
But I really don’t care,
You don’t fool me for a second,
So get out of here!
Get out!
Its past time for you to go,
You’ve never been welcome,
So get out of our home!
Get out,
Get out,
Get out get out get out,
Get out,
Get out,
Get out get out GET OUT-!
Come back and you’re dead.
(Gunshot)
It’s time for you to go,
You were never even welcome,
So get out of our home!
You’re always lying,
You take things you don’t buy and,
You leave trash wherever you may go,
So it’s time for you to go!
What makes you think we like you?
It’s just we learned to respect,
You never pay for what you eat,
Or what you owe,
So it’s time for you to go!
We weren’t good off without you,
But we were way better then,
We had food to eat,
But not anymore-,
Get out,
It’s time for you to go,
You were never even welcome,
So get out of our home!
What makes you think,
You can lie and make us family?
You can try to lie,
But you’ll never make it past me!
I've dealt with worse,
And believe me you’re not the first,
To be put sic feet down.
You won’t see me shed a tear,
When I put you in the ground!
We all make mistakes,
But you’re the biggest one,
So trust me when I warn you,
You better start to run!
Get out,
It’s time for you to go,
You were never even welcome,
So get out of our home!
We won’t worship the ground you walk on,
So get that through your head,
You can’t order us around,
And if you try you’ll end up Dead!
Is this song making you mad?
You ain’t seen nothing yet,
You talk all big and bad,
But wait till I go Boom!
I’ll blast you six feet under, BAM!
Come at me now,
I dare you to,
I'm calling your bluff,
I'm revealing your lies,
It’s time to pay your dues!
I know what you’re thinking,
But I really don’t care,
You don’t fool me for a second,
So get out of here!
Get out!
Its past time for you to go,
You’ve never been welcome,
So get out of our home!
Get out,
Get out,
Get out get out get out,
Get out,
Get out,
Get out get out GET OUT-!
Come back and you’re dead.
(Gunshot)
129 Comments
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Ooooh, these lyrics appeal to me. Great job
I just want to say, I think Chapter 5 is so meaningful. I have had suicidal thoughts and have took these into action. I am still here and this road goes up and down but I know that one day, maybe it might stay up. But also I am sorry about anything you may have been through but there IS a light at the end of tunnel.
Nah. I've thought about it to be completely honest, but I just can't bring myself to delete my account. I'm just not active all that much anymore is all
I couldn't delete mine either. The main reason I left was I had some trouble with some stalkers. But since I came back none have contacted me as far as I know
Man these are really well written and powerful songs! I especially love chapter 5.
I love the line: "They play with your emotions like a child with a toy. They don't know the concequences that come from their sick joy and you're left to heal your wounds, alone"
Thanks. Also I thought you left Quibblo a year or so ago?
So me and some friends finally started the band we planned in highschool. Finally found a lead singer too. My best friends twin! Anyway hopefully this means we will start working on and recording songs and posting them online.
I'm proud of you. These songs come from deep down somewhere; that place where we are each Alone in the complete sense. It has been my goal to express the same.
Mate, I wish I can vote twice, these songs are great!
Thanks
I'm happy that you use music to express these feelings honestly. I hope they get made into actual audio songs.
Very good! I like song 20. It's really heartfelt and honest which is important in song writing and poetry! Great Job! :D
Its true though. I want the person in that song to get lost. I'm just so sick of people right now.
A+ thumbs up 100%, all the positive-ness, these songs are on-point :D
Thanks :)