Some songs that I wrote
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I want everyone who has ever felt sad or alone to see chapter 5
Song List:
1) Break Down
2) Lies
3) Proud of Me
4) The Good Girl
5) You Are Not Alone
6) The Radio
7) The Survivors
8) Myself
9) The Mask
10) The Fallen Angel
11) Not Giving In
12) Outrage
13) Back Down
14) Tonight
15) Please Stay
16) Never Be You
17) Again
18) I Remember You
19) Our S.O.S.
20) Get Out
21) Thanks for Nothing
Its been some long hard years,
of havin' to face my fears,
I've been tryin' to hold back all my tears,
but now and then, some things still get to me,
and I, BREAK DOWN!
I just, plain break down!
I know I'm tough,
but now and then,
my fears still get to me!
and I, break down,
I try to hold it in,
at least till I can find someplace to hide,
I hate havin' to cry,
and I still don't get why they make fun of me,
when I, BREAK DOWN!
I just, plain break down!
I know I'm tough,
but now and then,
they all just get to me!
and I, break down,
Well the roads been rough,
and I've tried to be tough,
and yet I still find myself,
breaking down,
breaking down,
It's been another year,
and I've still broken down,
but then I look down and I feel my face,
and theres, no more tears,
now I'm all alone in a room where theres no one around, to hear me,
and I'm,
BREAKING DOWN!
yelling with all my might!
Im, BREAKING DOWN!
my tears have turned to stone!
now I know I'm tough,
even though I'm breaking down,
I know I'm tough,
not any more!
not at all!
I won't put up with it no more!
I'm not gonna cry!
not gonna hide!
not any more!
I know I'm better than them,
and I know I'm tougher than them!
and I know,
I know,
I know,
I'm still gonna,
break down,
I'm still gonna,
break, down.
of havin' to face my fears,
I've been tryin' to hold back all my tears,
but now and then, some things still get to me,
and I, BREAK DOWN!
I just, plain break down!
I know I'm tough,
but now and then,
my fears still get to me!
and I, break down,
I try to hold it in,
at least till I can find someplace to hide,
I hate havin' to cry,
and I still don't get why they make fun of me,
when I, BREAK DOWN!
I just, plain break down!
I know I'm tough,
but now and then,
they all just get to me!
and I, break down,
Well the roads been rough,
and I've tried to be tough,
and yet I still find myself,
breaking down,
breaking down,
It's been another year,
and I've still broken down,
but then I look down and I feel my face,
and theres, no more tears,
now I'm all alone in a room where theres no one around, to hear me,
and I'm,
BREAKING DOWN!
yelling with all my might!
Im, BREAKING DOWN!
my tears have turned to stone!
now I know I'm tough,
even though I'm breaking down,
I know I'm tough,
not any more!
not at all!
I won't put up with it no more!
I'm not gonna cry!
not gonna hide!
not any more!
I know I'm better than them,
and I know I'm tougher than them!
and I know,
I know,
I know,
I'm still gonna,
break down,
I'm still gonna,
break, down.
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Ooooh, these lyrics appeal to me. Great job
I just want to say, I think Chapter 5 is so meaningful. I have had suicidal thoughts and have took these into action. I am still here and this road goes up and down but I know that one day, maybe it might stay up. But also I am sorry about anything you may have been through but there IS a light at the end of tunnel.
Nah. I've thought about it to be completely honest, but I just can't bring myself to delete my account. I'm just not active all that much anymore is all
I couldn't delete mine either. The main reason I left was I had some trouble with some stalkers. But since I came back none have contacted me as far as I know
Man these are really well written and powerful songs! I especially love chapter 5.
I love the line: "They play with your emotions like a child with a toy. They don't know the concequences that come from their sick joy and you're left to heal your wounds, alone"
Thanks. Also I thought you left Quibblo a year or so ago?
So me and some friends finally started the band we planned in highschool. Finally found a lead singer too. My best friends twin! Anyway hopefully this means we will start working on and recording songs and posting them online.
I'm proud of you. These songs come from deep down somewhere; that place where we are each Alone in the complete sense. It has been my goal to express the same.
Mate, I wish I can vote twice, these songs are great!
Thanks
I'm happy that you use music to express these feelings honestly. I hope they get made into actual audio songs.
Very good! I like song 20. It's really heartfelt and honest which is important in song writing and poetry! Great Job! :D
Its true though. I want the person in that song to get lost. I'm just so sick of people right now.
A+ thumbs up 100%, all the positive-ness, these songs are on-point :D
Thanks :)