The Pain Inside
This poem is not mine. It was created by my friend while she was in a hospital bed. I asked her if I could share it with you all and she was fine with it. Anything you would like to say about this poem, I will show and tell her :)
I can't think anymore
My mind is numb
All that's coming out of me is tears
It is my sign of weakness,
Being hurt too much
They all think
It'll pass by me in time
But I've felt this for two years
I get happy, they take it away
They say they care
But there's a reason for the sadness in my eyes,
The weakness in my bones
I just wish I could end the pain
It'd be so simple to not feel anything
That's already what I do
So why not just
Stop the pain for "good"
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This is a great poem and I can tell it's really from the heart.
Good poem! I hope your friend get better.
love this poem.... and tell her that wolf cares! Or you could call me Shadow...
This is lovely, and quite elegantly shaped. My prayers and best wishes go with your friend.
I love the emotion in the poem. I mean, I don't love pain, but I love the way that you conveyed emotion through poetry.
i can relate to this is so many ways. please tell your friend that this is amazing.
Beautifully written! Great poem an I really don't even like poems all that much, but this is great!
A wonderful poem that really conveys emotion. Well written. I hope the sadness in it is a passing thing. :)
I hope it is, too... but I don't think it is.
Yeah, life really sucks sometimes.
I like it :) although pain is something you create yourself by thinking you are weak when actually you have a power you don't even realize you have. Smile, live your life and get rid of those who hurt you :3
Thank you :) this is very nice of you. Sadly, this pain is being caused by her parents, so she can't really get rid of her parents o.O
Then.. to get rid of memories :3 it will all get better someday :)
This is a really good poem. But really sad
Yes it is, but my friends is going through tough times :( so I understand why she feels this way