Not Just Another Day
Just a story I thought up. I'll probably have a new chapter up at least once every couple days.
I wake up in a vast, open field. Golden brown, dead grass crunches beneath my footsteps. Suddenly, I can't move. My feet are rooted in place and a dark fog hangs low over the ground. I see a vague outline of a tall, slender man approaching me, but I can't make out any details
He walks toward me slowly, the fog swirling around him like a cloak. I try to turn and run, to yell, anything, but I can't do anything.
When he reaches me, he grabs my upper arm with his right hand. Then, the worst pain I've ever felt in my life erupts in my arm, right where he grabbed me.
It feels like my skin is boiling!
He walks toward me slowly, the fog swirling around him like a cloak. I try to turn and run, to yell, anything, but I can't do anything.
When he reaches me, he grabs my upper arm with his right hand. Then, the worst pain I've ever felt in my life erupts in my arm, right where he grabbed me.
It feels like my skin is boiling!
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Me likey this story. :) Though perhaps too many cuss words for my taste. :P Five stars, though.
Yeah I tend to cuss a lot lol
Come on, add more chapters! It is on my favorites.
great story
Thank you :)
you're welcome giggles
wow you are a great writer. this is definitely going on favorites. :)
Thanks! That's really nice of you :)
It seems interesting so far. I'm interested to see how it continues.
This sounds like a very interesting story! ^^
I want more please :)
Cooper sounds like a cool person... I want to punch Drake XD
Haha thanks :)
Sounds kinda interesting!
Thanks!
Is this based off of a true story?
Are you planning on continuing this story or is it meant to be one chapter long?
No, this isn't true. It's just kind of for fun.
And I'm gonna be adding a chapter at least every couple days
Alright, thanks for answering my questions.
You're a pretty good writer.
You rarely see stories on this website from a guy's point of view.
I hope you'll keep writing, I'd like to see where this story goes.
Thanks! :)