Can You Hear Me?

So here's yet another poem, let me know your thoughts please?
If you have any criticism, please be welcomed to share that also. I'd love to hear what you have to say no matter what. Constructive criticism is how we get better after all.
Thank you for reading though :)

Chapter 1

Poem

Darling, can you hear me?
I'm saying I love you every night
through the silence and the darkness
after the sound and the light.

Darling, can you hear me?
I'm saying I love you to the sky
through the moon and the stars
even after our goodbye.

I know it's coming out in a whisper
but tell me you can hear me so
because I really do love you with all my heart
and I know you had me at our first hello.

So darling, can you hear me?
I'm saying I love you from beneath my covers
like I have every night
in hopes that we can become lovers.

Darling, can you hear me?
Oh darling please, can you hear me this time?
I'm telling you that I'll love you forever
and that you'll always be worth my climb.

Darling, oh darling, can you hear me at all?

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