The Grammar Witch and the Candor Take On "Lovestruck"

Her Introduction:

Its about Bambi a hogwarts seventh year and Draco. Da short chatpers were enoyng me soz im moving everything over hear!! Bambi goes to Hogwarts: The Disney and JK Rowling Musical!
(Bambi’s going to Hogwarts? Okay, this time the animal rights activists have gone too far!)

Now the (random text here) are Jackie's commentary. The random text here is mine. So Jackie has parentheses. I don't.

Chapter 3

May The Odds Be Never In Her Favor

AN;Thanks 4 da good comemts and messages! There’s good comments?! Thanks to Hayley 4 help in!! She’s not helping you… Fac Do; make: Latin word. Example: We would like you to stop fac-ing this story. off you emos hu r leavin bad comments!!!!!!!! Can you blame us?

I woke up in my dom. Candi nd my best gay guy frend Ron was thier. Ron had died (Is this Resurrection or something? Or everyone a ghost here?) his hair blond ad is wearing dark blue skinniys and a pink tank top and a white scarf an Candi was wearing a low cit see-throu toop and a short pleeted skirt.

"Dabami!!!!! he yellyd "Ur awkae!!!!"
"Wat happend?" I asked confused
"Jams potter tryd to kill u!!" Candi said
"Nd he has draco!!" Ron abbed "He leftd this not." He left this not? Oh Romeo, oh Romeo, you left thy not.

Dear Bambi

I have ur boyfriend, met me @ midnight 2nite in the forbidden forest or he dies.

Love James

"o no!!!111' i cied
Then Candi and roon said"Bye wer goin 2 get breekfas with Sedrict!" and left. Cedric. Cedric. Cedric.

I got changed in2 mini shorts and a cropped shirt and then painted my nails pink wile waiting 4 midinight.

@ 11 i started looking for my riffle *Yeah….gun control so i could shoot jmes and when i fond it i put da bullets in. By 5 2 12 i was ready to go.

The foreboding forost is creepy i want 2 go bak but i must save Draco. I screamd when a tree brunch fell on me cuting my leg open. And our “hero” is felled by a tree branch. Hey Jackie….another Hunger Games victim? (Let’s just hope the odds aren’t in her favor.)

I walked in2 a cave that was infront of me nd James was ther wit Draco. (Yeah, our leg is gushing out blood and let’s just casually strut into a cave. That makes sense.) i ran 2 draco nd tryd 2 untie him."STOP!"James yeled pickin me up and pullin me away from my rifle nd draco. "Eeeeeeeep!"i screamed.
"OMFG I'm sorry i didnt mean 2 hurt u."James said sadly while he tyed me up.

Studiedly.............................Voldemorcet appeared!! Gasp!

"Well done James" Vodermort said clapping Voldermort clapping…..okay? "Now kill her"

James looked scared"I cant" he siad
"Why not voldermort saidbac
"Because I love her!!"James said Mary-Sue symptom #194

I gasped. Like a fish? Can we cut off your oxygen supply? (Okay, Emily, I’ll start a fire so you have an excuse!) Yes!

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