Quibblo Writing Contest #16.

Please READ, RATE, AND COMMENT! ESPECIALLY COMMENT!!!!!!!!!! I NEED MORE OF THOSE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay I guess I have to add some stuff like what inspired me to write this and a couple links to some of my favorite poems.

I love music, that's really it. I wrote this in about 10 minutes so I don't really know where it came from.

Chapter 1


by: Salocin
The beat runs through me, straight to my heart.

That adrenaline rush, that high, better than any drug.

I lose myself in it.

I never want this feeling to stop.

If there is a heaven I hope this is what it’s like.

Never stopping; always there.

This thing that makes me complete.

The pounding of it take over.

I am no longer here.

Now I am everywhere because it is everywhere and I am it.

We are one now joined together for eternity.

My soul has become so wrapped around it.

It pounds on my soul demanding more.

I give it freely.

This beautiful thing.

This treasure to the world.

Those words, those notes.

I can give no more, I have given all I can.

But still I will listen as my heart jumps with the rhythm and dances with the lyrics.

I will still be listening when I draw my last breath, my last beat I will give to it.

And let it take me away to be with it forever.


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