Ballerinas in Training
Name: Sari Granger
Personality: nice, good at ballet, friendly, sarcastic
Looks: African American, wears a bun always, glasses, tall, graceful
Friends: everyone except LaDeysha Williams
Extra: doesn't like LaDeysha because she's better, buts working on it
Chapter 1
Chapter 1
" Back straight, suck in your gut, " my ballet teacher commanded. I obeyed, but she ignored me. " Great, LaDeysha. You will defininetly make Swan Lake. " I implored LaDeysha to stop being so perfect. The music ended. I demi-pliéd, and stretched. " Sari, keep your hand on the bar. " Mrs. Pike said, glaring. LaDeysha turned and shot me a triumphant look.
After dance class, I left to my dorm, leaving my friend Keelie trailing behind. She caught up to me a second later. " Sari, that was the best ballet you've done, ever " she exclaimed. I nodded misrably. " Mrs. Pike obviously doesn't think so. " I sniffled. " Sari Granger, I cannot believe this is you! You are the best, and LaDeysha is just being a teachers pet. " I looked at her. " Mrs. Pike said LaDeysha would probably make Swan Lake. "
" So? " Keelie said, " You will too. "
" There's a difference. LaDeysha will be the Prima Ballerina, and I will be in the ensemble. " I said. Keelie took my hand. " Sari, Mrs. Pike knows your the best. She just wants LaDeysha to do the best she can. She doesn't say anything to you because she knows your the best! " I cheered up a bit.
" Oh girls! Talking behind people's backs isnt very nice! " I heard LaDeysha's triumphant voice about a meter behind. " I'm the best, and Mrs. Pike knows it. You ought to give up. I'm going to get the prima ballerina spot for Swan Lake. " My spirits fell. I trudged off, taking off my pointe shoes. I lay them in my lucky dance bag. " Stupid bag. Haven't done a thing " I muttered under my breath.
Keelie entered the room, a moment later. " Don't let LaDeysha get you down. She's just a stupid know-it-all. " I shook my head, and sprawled across the bed. " Sari, we have dinner in 30. " Keelie called to me, as she hit the showers.
I groaned. I didn't remember, but I must have fallen asleep... I woke up to Keelie shaking me violently, yelling in my ear. " Geez, I'm up! " I shouted, holding up my hands. I dressed in my summer breezies, or short-shorts and a T-shirt, and slipped on some flats. " Ready, " I said. Keelie grabbed me and lead me out the door.
We entered the lunch room, which can only be summarized as a fun place, or the danger zone. Today, like always was the danger zone. " Sari, dear, Swan Lake tryouts are in a few days. Wouldn't count on it. " LaDeysha's friend, Reyna, smirked. LaDeysha swiveled in her seat. " I'm the best, " she breathed into my ear, " I'm the best and don't you forget it. " She pushed me away, and I staggered towards Keelie, who lead me out of the lunchroom.
I threw myself on my bed when we got back. " We'll just order some meals via intercom. " Keelie sighed. " Leave me alone. " my voice muffled in the pillows started to take on a teary quality. " You said I was good, but I'm not. I suck at ballet. I should quit! " I started to cry, and became aware of Keelie patting my back. I cried until I nodded off...
After dance class, I left to my dorm, leaving my friend Keelie trailing behind. She caught up to me a second later. " Sari, that was the best ballet you've done, ever " she exclaimed. I nodded misrably. " Mrs. Pike obviously doesn't think so. " I sniffled. " Sari Granger, I cannot believe this is you! You are the best, and LaDeysha is just being a teachers pet. " I looked at her. " Mrs. Pike said LaDeysha would probably make Swan Lake. "
" So? " Keelie said, " You will too. "
" There's a difference. LaDeysha will be the Prima Ballerina, and I will be in the ensemble. " I said. Keelie took my hand. " Sari, Mrs. Pike knows your the best. She just wants LaDeysha to do the best she can. She doesn't say anything to you because she knows your the best! " I cheered up a bit.
" Oh girls! Talking behind people's backs isnt very nice! " I heard LaDeysha's triumphant voice about a meter behind. " I'm the best, and Mrs. Pike knows it. You ought to give up. I'm going to get the prima ballerina spot for Swan Lake. " My spirits fell. I trudged off, taking off my pointe shoes. I lay them in my lucky dance bag. " Stupid bag. Haven't done a thing " I muttered under my breath.
Keelie entered the room, a moment later. " Don't let LaDeysha get you down. She's just a stupid know-it-all. " I shook my head, and sprawled across the bed. " Sari, we have dinner in 30. " Keelie called to me, as she hit the showers.
I groaned. I didn't remember, but I must have fallen asleep... I woke up to Keelie shaking me violently, yelling in my ear. " Geez, I'm up! " I shouted, holding up my hands. I dressed in my summer breezies, or short-shorts and a T-shirt, and slipped on some flats. " Ready, " I said. Keelie grabbed me and lead me out the door.
We entered the lunch room, which can only be summarized as a fun place, or the danger zone. Today, like always was the danger zone. " Sari, dear, Swan Lake tryouts are in a few days. Wouldn't count on it. " LaDeysha's friend, Reyna, smirked. LaDeysha swiveled in her seat. " I'm the best, " she breathed into my ear, " I'm the best and don't you forget it. " She pushed me away, and I staggered towards Keelie, who lead me out of the lunchroom.
I threw myself on my bed when we got back. " We'll just order some meals via intercom. " Keelie sighed. " Leave me alone. " my voice muffled in the pillows started to take on a teary quality. " You said I was good, but I'm not. I suck at ballet. I should quit! " I started to cry, and became aware of Keelie patting my back. I cried until I nodded off...
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Amazing Job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Moremoremoremoremore Omigod it's awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Once I started reading the first chapte, I knew I was going to love this story! :)
Thanks :)
The actually do do that in a real book like a novel.
But not like, all the time but thanks off the advice
Now I'm on ti formatting. When a different character says something start a new paragraph.
Example:
"I can't believe she said that!," Cassandra vented to her friend Lea. "Well" Lea started but Cassandra quickly cut her off. "That up start pig!" Lea secrectly thought Cassandra was over reacting but she keept her feeling to herself.
Example with spacing:
"I can't believe she said that!," Cassandra vented to her friend Lea.
"Well" Lea started but Cassandra quickly cut her off.
Hmmmm.... I don't normally do that b/cuz I am trying to write a real book and that's not how you write a real book
VERY VERY NICE....YOUR GOOD AT THESE
Thanks so much
The 6th chapter was really good!!
I find this story amazing considering Im a ballerina too :)
Roles in Swan lake
The Prince
The Magician
The 11 other Swan's
Odette/Odile or Odette and Odile
Party goers
Princes Company (hunting)
Queen and King(some versions)
The Magician, Odille(if she also isn't also Oddette), the king and queen are solists which are the people who have solos (supporting roles) but aren't prima.
Prima is Odette.
Everyone else is ensemble.
Fun fact about Swan Lake. It is the hardest ballet ever and Odilles variation is the hardest ballet piece.
No problem. :)
Chapter 2
Practice shoes: technique shoes
Prima in Swan lake is Odette. Sometimes she also plays Odile as well.
K thanks I don't know what I'd do without your tips, you see I just reastarted ballet last year so not too familier
IM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! OMGGGGGGGGG MORE! :D
Thanks :) I will do
Yay!