Time Is Running Out (an original story)
okay, this is me writing this. hope you like it! comment/rate!
I was being forced into a long, beautiful white dress. Tears were streamind down my face as I kicked begged and screamed.
"Please! Mother, you can't let them!" I shouted, staring at my mother across the room.
She just gave me an evil smile. "It's for your own good, Nikita. Someday you'll thank me.
I shook my head and struggled even harder. "No, no no! NO! Let me GO!"
I sat up with a jolt, gasping for breath. I looked out of the hut and saw that the sun was rising.
I threw on some clothes, pulled on my shoes, and walked out of the hut I lived in, shaking my hair out of my eyes.
(her outfit: http://www.polyvore.com/fox/set?id=61530325)
"Hey Fox, you okay?" I turned and smiled down at Ryder as he hurried to catch up with me.
Ryder is the youngest boy in camp. He's only 7 and is very curious. His parents were killed when they were on a mission. The whole camp looks after him, but I've grown pretty attached to him myself, which isn't something I do very easily.
I crouched down so that I was on his level and gave him a hug.
"Good morning, little man. What are you doing up so early?" I ruffled his hair and Ryder giggled.
"I heard you yelling in your sleep again." Ryder's face fell into a frown. "Are you okay Fox?"
"Aw, Ryder, honey." I hugged him again, stroking his curly blond hair. "It was just a dream. I'm fine sweetie, okay?"
I pulled back and Ryder nodded.
I smiled and held out my hand. "Do you want to go watch the sun rise with me?"
Ryder nodded again and took my hand.
"Maria!" I called over my shoulder at the older woman.
She turned and squinted at us.
"I'm taking Ryder to see the sunrise. I just thought you should know." I said, smiling.
Maria and waved. "Be careful, Fox!"
"I will, don't worry, Maria." Ryder and I waved before turning and walking towards the outskirts of camp.
"Please! Mother, you can't let them!" I shouted, staring at my mother across the room.
She just gave me an evil smile. "It's for your own good, Nikita. Someday you'll thank me.
I shook my head and struggled even harder. "No, no no! NO! Let me GO!"
I sat up with a jolt, gasping for breath. I looked out of the hut and saw that the sun was rising.
I threw on some clothes, pulled on my shoes, and walked out of the hut I lived in, shaking my hair out of my eyes.
(her outfit: http://www.polyvore.com/fox/set?id=61530325)
"Hey Fox, you okay?" I turned and smiled down at Ryder as he hurried to catch up with me.
Ryder is the youngest boy in camp. He's only 7 and is very curious. His parents were killed when they were on a mission. The whole camp looks after him, but I've grown pretty attached to him myself, which isn't something I do very easily.
I crouched down so that I was on his level and gave him a hug.
"Good morning, little man. What are you doing up so early?" I ruffled his hair and Ryder giggled.
"I heard you yelling in your sleep again." Ryder's face fell into a frown. "Are you okay Fox?"
"Aw, Ryder, honey." I hugged him again, stroking his curly blond hair. "It was just a dream. I'm fine sweetie, okay?"
I pulled back and Ryder nodded.
I smiled and held out my hand. "Do you want to go watch the sun rise with me?"
Ryder nodded again and took my hand.
"Maria!" I called over my shoulder at the older woman.
She turned and squinted at us.
"I'm taking Ryder to see the sunrise. I just thought you should know." I said, smiling.
Maria and waved. "Be careful, Fox!"
"I will, don't worry, Maria." Ryder and I waved before turning and walking towards the outskirts of camp.
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cliffhanger! wth!!!!!!! lol good story
haha, I couldn't resist. and thanks. :D
Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i need more!!!!!!!!!!!
wheres chapter 20????????? message me when its done!!!!!!!!!! XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
XD lol, okay! working on it as soon as I can and will do! :D
ta very much!!!!! XD
Hurry!!! Please!!
I hate the cliffhanger!! Who is it?!?!
lol, I'll get a new chapter up as soon as I can! XD
NOW WRITE MORE!!!
lol, as soon as I can! XD
Awesome, as usual! :D
thanks! :D
Well thought out and a really good story! 5 STARS! boop
thanks! :D
YOU HAVE THE POWER TO BRING BOTH OF US RELIEF FROM THIS ANXIOUS WAIT! WRITE, YOU SPECTACULAR FOOL, WRIIIIIIIITE!
and text me^-^lol
I will write...as soon as I can. XD tonight's karaoke night here at the house.XD
oh good:)
TWITCHES You are a fantastic writer m'dear. I can't wait for the next chapter!
grins happily thanks, my darling! I can't either. XD
no pressure<3
PRESSURE!!!!!!!!!!
Oh, yeah, none felt. whatsoever. XD