fading away

a poem i wrote. will y'all tell me if its any good? im not really sure because i think that everything i write isnt good enough.

Chapter 1

fading away

by: burr
im slowly fading away.
away from the girl i used to know.
i look back over my shoulder,
i see my friends ... the ones i used to know.
im slowly fading away, fading away from the life i used to have.
im slowly going insane...
ive lost myself....
the girl i used to know isnt here anymore
shes slowly faded away.
i fight....i fight with all my mite.
im on the outside looking in.
locked in my room day & night ,
i lift and slide the blade...
just to watch the blood pour away.
im slowly fading away
from the life i used to led.
i wish things were so simple...
im slowly going insane....
thoughts are locked in my head. oh yes.
im slowly going insane....
im losing the girl i used to know.
im on the outside looking in.
outside looking in on my life.
im slowly fading away.
fading away from everything good in my life.
im slowly fading away..
fading away into nothing.

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