Tell me if this okay. this is my first try at poetry........ :\

tell me honestly if this poem is okay.......

Chapter 1

Temptation

There is resistance
I can resist the temptation
Power of needy, useless things are not to get to me
I must stay strong
Among the needy
Among the wrong
If I fail in my attempts, shoot me
Shoot me until I die for my weakness to succumb to the temptation I vowed to resist
Shoot me dead
For the resistance I vowed to uphold has broken
I need the useless things of the needy
So shoot me
Shoot me for my weakness to the resistance
The resistance of needy, useless things of the weak.

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