Lovestruck Draco malfoy story
Its about Bambi a hogwarts seventh year and Draco. Da short chatpers were enoyng me soz im moving everything over hear!!
Hey!My name is Dabria Kathrine Ashleigh Tucker-Price, but everyone calls me Bambi because of my big green eyes.I have Long sun kissed golden hair that falls into perfect curls and sun kissed clear skin and I amslim, but have perfect curves in all of the right places.I attend howarts and am in Gryfindore, in my seventh year.I wear MINISKIRTS or shorts everyday and sometimes tight skinny jeans, cool DRESSES, i wear TOPS, SCARVES, necklaces, HIGH HEELS.I love TARTAN clothes especially dresses n skirts.I paint my NAILS everyday and wear a little bit of make up, just fondation, blue eyeliner(not alot I dont want to look like a f^king emo), eyeshadow and lipgloss.
Today I am wearing a tight, low cut floral minidress that clung to my body and Black high heels that made my long, slim legs look even longer.I walked to the Great hall and spotted my goerguos, blonde, frind Candi Alexandra Hayley Smith(A/N:Hayley thats you babe!) at the Slytherine table.
In her first year she got sorted in to the Slytherin house and hates it.i sat down next 2 her nd got dirty loks from the slytherins, so i puled the finger at was wearing a tight wite tank top and denim booty shorts that she looked uber hot in"I f^king hat it here all th slytherins are bitccy emos!"Candi saied to me"lets move to your table."We stood and were stopped by Draco Malfoy the hottest boy in existence, well for a emo slytherin."Hey girls,"he said sexily"MCR are playing in Hogsmede tonight, I'll meet you here at eight."wihout thinkig I said"Yes."and Candi gasped.
Candi gasped and pulled me away from Draco"You can't go to MCR with draca!Hes a stypid emo!And do you even know what mcr is?!!!11'
"Noo!Of corse not, Candi whats MCr?"I assked
"A f^king emo band i f^king hate them!"
"Excuse me, are you guys talking about MCR?I heard Drako wanted to take you."said a stypid emo slytherine called pansy.
"Yeah, why the f^c do you care?"Candi shoted
"Well i thought you might not fit in well with the of the other ppl at the concert, I mean lok at how ur dressed!'pansy said pointing at our cute cloths"I could help if you want."
"Fine."I siad bak and then we went into da slytherinies commen roam.
Pansy lent us sum clothes and i put mine were a skirt that had skulls on it and sum black fishnets wif rips nd sum conberse shoes and a black tank tup wit MCR on it. I started to puttput mah hare in a messy bun but ponsy stopped me.
"I ned to spray paint it black first!"she said and i gosped.
"You are not painting my hare black!'i yeilied
"fin!I wil just put in sum streaks."she said bac
By eght I lookd fantastically emo and went to the gret hal to meet draco with Candi, she loked emo as well she was wearing a leather mini dress and red fishnets and concerse shoes with black liggloss and blac hd did her haire black.
"Thank you Pansy,you are a life saver we would have looked so stypid without you."Candi sasid
"I know!We could spell your name with a i so its pansi instead of Pansy."
Pansi Smiled at us"It was no probelm bye!'and she ran off
""Rite ready to go?I assed candi
"Yup!"she said back and we walked sexily into the great hal.
Today I am wearing a tight, low cut floral minidress that clung to my body and Black high heels that made my long, slim legs look even longer.I walked to the Great hall and spotted my goerguos, blonde, frind Candi Alexandra Hayley Smith(A/N:Hayley thats you babe!) at the Slytherine table.
In her first year she got sorted in to the Slytherin house and hates it.i sat down next 2 her nd got dirty loks from the slytherins, so i puled the finger at was wearing a tight wite tank top and denim booty shorts that she looked uber hot in"I f^king hat it here all th slytherins are bitccy emos!"Candi saied to me"lets move to your table."We stood and were stopped by Draco Malfoy the hottest boy in existence, well for a emo slytherin."Hey girls,"he said sexily"MCR are playing in Hogsmede tonight, I'll meet you here at eight."wihout thinkig I said"Yes."and Candi gasped.
Candi gasped and pulled me away from Draco"You can't go to MCR with draca!Hes a stypid emo!And do you even know what mcr is?!!!11'
"Noo!Of corse not, Candi whats MCr?"I assked
"A f^king emo band i f^king hate them!"
"Excuse me, are you guys talking about MCR?I heard Drako wanted to take you."said a stypid emo slytherine called pansy.
"Yeah, why the f^c do you care?"Candi shoted
"Well i thought you might not fit in well with the of the other ppl at the concert, I mean lok at how ur dressed!'pansy said pointing at our cute cloths"I could help if you want."
"Fine."I siad bak and then we went into da slytherinies commen roam.
Pansy lent us sum clothes and i put mine were a skirt that had skulls on it and sum black fishnets wif rips nd sum conberse shoes and a black tank tup wit MCR on it. I started to puttput mah hare in a messy bun but ponsy stopped me.
"I ned to spray paint it black first!"she said and i gosped.
"You are not painting my hare black!'i yeilied
"fin!I wil just put in sum streaks."she said bac
By eght I lookd fantastically emo and went to the gret hal to meet draco with Candi, she loked emo as well she was wearing a leather mini dress and red fishnets and concerse shoes with black liggloss and blac hd did her haire black.
"Thank you Pansy,you are a life saver we would have looked so stypid without you."Candi sasid
"I know!We could spell your name with a i so its pansi instead of Pansy."
Pansi Smiled at us"It was no probelm bye!'and she ran off
""Rite ready to go?I assed candi
"Yup!"she said back and we walked sexily into the great hal.
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Imagine if professional authors actually started using "@" and "&" in their stories... shivers. But I agree with the people who are saying that the spelling is atrocious and the incorrect use of "emo" is disgraceful.
I mean the concert was full of poseur emo and Goths? I think the only poser emo here is you, since you dress up as one (considering you hate them?) to go to a concert of a band who isn't real emo.
I petition this to be taken down, here and now. Who's with me?!
omfg I just read the second chapter omfg
I can't understand most of this, and I won't doubt that a lot of my characters in the past have been very pretty, but never describe it all at once, spread it out. My characters always have some sort of flaws, and yours should as well. Personally, I would never call someone freaking "Bambi" on account of their big green eyes. Bambi didn't have effing green eyes.
WTF IS THIS SH^T
I've lost faith in this generation completely.
omg, so many mistakes, i cant understand much
Not everything is Emo.
The spelling and grammar and punctuation... it's a joke right?
Um... just no.