Lovestruck (Draco Malfoy Love story)- With my Commentary >=D
We all know what Lovestruck is, right? The story?
Well, I am pleased to introduce...
LOVESTRUCK WITH MY COMMENTARY!
MWAAHAHAHAHA!
AN: I want commontsand I wanted Tom Felton, but you know what, sometimes we all have to live with a little disappointment !!Tnx 2 all da ppl hu vooted:)
Darko was in da greet hsl alredddy wearing a MCR t0shirt nd blck skinny jeans wih hs frenf blaze. Blaze was jst s hawt as dracoe. Wee walker 2 da place whet da concert was goon 2 b.
the covert was fill of poser emus and goths nd dey wer all wring blac butt i hd fuun. Drako nd I went strait 2 da moshpit and sow danced you went to a mosh pit... and SLOW DANCE?! .Candi nd Blaze disapppred in2 the crowd.
Billie Armstrong song helena as drakco nd i dnced nd den.... Drakoe kissed meep Everyone, say it with me.... LE GOSP! !!!The concert fishesd nd we went bac to hoowarts.
Az we wlked thro da door sum1 grapped draco!! OH NOES!
"AHHHHH!111!!!" DRAKO shootyd!
I followed them swexily no comment T_T and the eprson tht grabped him was...James Potter!! OMG NOES!
"J`ms?" I yeilded. "OMFG wat da hel r u doin her? I THUHT U WER DED!"
Jams lafed an evul laf. "Ha ha ha" he lafed, lafing you can only laugh so much at one time, hon. . "Ha ha ha. U dont understn,d, Bambi. U c... I m wrkin 4 Vldomrt!`" "Oh hey, Harry. I'm your Dad. I'm back from the dead. But actually, I'm working for the man who killed your mother and me, and he tried to kill you."
"O Noooo!" I shootyd.
Jame shooted me with a spell amd I fainted..... oh noes! Suspense periods!
Darko was in da greet hsl alredddy wearing a MCR t0shirt nd blck skinny jeans wih hs frenf blaze. Blaze was jst s hawt as dracoe. Wee walker 2 da place whet da concert was goon 2 b.
the covert was fill of poser emus and goths nd dey wer all wring blac butt i hd fuun. Drako nd I went strait 2 da moshpit and sow danced you went to a mosh pit... and SLOW DANCE?! .Candi nd Blaze disapppred in2 the crowd.
Billie Armstrong song helena as drakco nd i dnced nd den.... Drakoe kissed meep Everyone, say it with me.... LE GOSP! !!!The concert fishesd nd we went bac to hoowarts.
Az we wlked thro da door sum1 grapped draco!! OH NOES!
"AHHHHH!111!!!" DRAKO shootyd!
I followed them swexily no comment T_T and the eprson tht grabped him was...James Potter!! OMG NOES!
"J`ms?" I yeilded. "OMFG wat da hel r u doin her? I THUHT U WER DED!"
Jams lafed an evul laf. "Ha ha ha" he lafed, lafing you can only laugh so much at one time, hon. . "Ha ha ha. U dont understn,d, Bambi. U c... I m wrkin 4 Vldomrt!`" "Oh hey, Harry. I'm your Dad. I'm back from the dead. But actually, I'm working for the man who killed your mother and me, and he tried to kill you."
"O Noooo!" I shootyd.
Jame shooted me with a spell amd I fainted..... oh noes! Suspense periods!
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I somehow came to know about this amazingly interesting story and I thought of reading some commentaries on it. I found yours... and you have no idea how much I laughed. XD I haven't had this kind of laugh in ages. Seriously. I can't even breathe, LOL. I read all the chapters and I am doubtful about my mind being at the right place. Sorry if I made any mistake writing this. I have kind of forgotten what English is. :D Oh gosh! I do hope I'm able to find my brain again. XD
I wish that it was longer. It's stupid but extremely funny. XD
I'm truly sorry, i try to never leave mean comments but this needed to be done. This story is awful. It was funny at first & i read a few more chapters cuz i thought maybe it would get better, but it didn't. This is truly a terrible story.
Two Things:
1 this girl is so f-ing funny and AWESOME...!
2 i read this whole story with bambi's voice sounding like LSP's from adventure time...O-O
i can tell you right off the bat, the original story isn't even worth laughing at anymore. I didn't know there were 50+ different characters through out the story! The girl needs read this story for herself. Too bad Danni_ isn't a member on Quibblo anymore..
i didn't really like the commentary. other than that it was pretty well written. i'm meaning no offence but she su cks at spelling, grammar, and other simple mechanics of writing.
This. Is. HILARIOUS!
Oh Soul, you make my day even when you're offline and I read your random stuff xD I love you!!!
I almost peed reading this! God this is funny!
omg has that girl even read harry potter