Lovestruck (Draco Malfoy Love story)- With my Commentary >=D
We all know what Lovestruck is, right? The story?
Well, I am pleased to introduce...
LOVESTRUCK WITH MY COMMENTARY!
MWAAHAHAHAHA!
Hey!My name is Dabria Kathrine Ashleigh Tucker-Price hey, my name is Super Cali Fragilistic Expi Allidocius , but everyone calls me Bambi because of my big green eyes snicker.I have Long sun kissed golden hair that falls into perfect curls oh, and I have short moon kissed black hair that falls in a straight line and sun kissed clear skin and I amslim, but have perfect curves in all of the right places.I attend howarts and am in Gryfindore learn to spell your own house name , in my seventh year.I wear MINISKIRTS or shorts everyday and sometimes tight skinny jeans, cool DRESSES, i wear TOPS I hope you would..., SCARVES, necklaces, HIGH HEELS.I love TARTAN clothes especially dresses n skirts.I paint my NAILS everyday and wear a little bit of make up, just fondation, blue eyeliner(not alot I dont want to look like a f^king emo emos are better than you), eyeshadow and lipgloss.
Today I am wearing a tight, low cut floral minidress that clung to my body and Black high heels that made my long, slim legs look even longer yeah, because that's the Hogwart's uniform.I walked to the Great hall and spotted my goerguos, blonde, frind Candi Alexandra Hayley Smith(A/N:Hayley thats you babe! poor Hayley ) at the Slytherine table.
In her first year she got sorted in to the Slytherin house and hates it.i sat down next 2 her nd got dirty loks from the slytherins, so i puled the finger at was wearing a tight wite tank top and denim booty shorts can you say s!ut? that she looked uber hot in"I f^king hat it here all th slytherins are bitccy emos!" oh, because you're not? Candi saied to me"lets move to your table."We stood and were stopped by Draco Malfoy the hottest boy in existence, well for a emo slytherin HOW DARE YOU RUIN MY DRACO BY CALLING HIM AN EMO?!."Hey girls,"he said sexily"MCR ( yeah, because wizards know about muggle bands ) are playing in Hogsmede tonight, I'll meet you here at eight."wihout thinkig I said"Yes."and Candi gasped. LE GASP!
Candi gasped LE GASP NUMBER TWO! and pulled me away from Draco"You can't go to MCR with draca!Hes a stypid emo ( I hate you. ) !And do you even know what mcr is?!!!11'
"Noo!Of corse not, Candi whats MCr?"I assked then why the hell did you say yes?
"A f^king emo band i f^king hate them!" oh yeah? Well, My Chemical Romance is amazing.
"Excuse me, are you guys talking about MCR?I heard Drako wanted to take you."said a stypid emo slytherine called pansy. Pansy is actually Einstein's daughter compared to you.
"Yeah, why the f^c do you care?"Candi shoted she only asked a question, jeez.
"Well i thought you might not fit in well with the of the other ppl at the concert, I mean lok at how ur dressed!'pansy said pointing at our cute cloths cute? you mean s!utty "I could help if you want."
"Fine."I siad bak and then we went into da slytherinies commen roam.
Pansy lent us sum clothes and i put mine were a skirt that had skulls on it and sum black fishnets wif rips nd sum conberse shoes and a black tank tup wit MCR on it yeah, because fishnets are sooo emo T_T . I started to puttput mah hare in a messy bun but ponsy stopped me.
"I ned to spray paint it black first!"she said and i gosped. LE GASP NUMBER THREE! Wait, did I say gasp? I meant: LE GOSP NUMBER THREE! much better.
"You are not painting my hare black!'i yeilied
"fin!I wil just put in sum streaks."she said bac
By eght I lookd fantastically emo I thought you just said emos were stupid? and went to the gret hal to meet draco with Candi, she loked emo as well she was wearing a leather mini dress and red fishnets and concerse shoes with black liggloss and blac hd did her haire black.
"Thank you Pansy,you are a life saver we would have looked so stypid without you."Candi sasid you look stupid either way, hon.
"I know!We could spell your name with a i so its pansi instead of Pansy." because that will definitely make her super cool.
Pansi Smiled at us"It was no probelm bye!'and she ran off
""Rite ready to go?I assed candi you assed candi? You sicko.
"Yup!"she said back and we walked sexily into the great hal. I thought you were going to Hogsmeade.
Today I am wearing a tight, low cut floral minidress that clung to my body and Black high heels that made my long, slim legs look even longer yeah, because that's the Hogwart's uniform.I walked to the Great hall and spotted my goerguos, blonde, frind Candi Alexandra Hayley Smith(A/N:Hayley thats you babe! poor Hayley ) at the Slytherine table.
In her first year she got sorted in to the Slytherin house and hates it.i sat down next 2 her nd got dirty loks from the slytherins, so i puled the finger at was wearing a tight wite tank top and denim booty shorts can you say s!ut? that she looked uber hot in"I f^king hat it here all th slytherins are bitccy emos!" oh, because you're not? Candi saied to me"lets move to your table."We stood and were stopped by Draco Malfoy the hottest boy in existence, well for a emo slytherin HOW DARE YOU RUIN MY DRACO BY CALLING HIM AN EMO?!."Hey girls,"he said sexily"MCR ( yeah, because wizards know about muggle bands ) are playing in Hogsmede tonight, I'll meet you here at eight."wihout thinkig I said"Yes."and Candi gasped. LE GASP!
Candi gasped LE GASP NUMBER TWO! and pulled me away from Draco"You can't go to MCR with draca!Hes a stypid emo ( I hate you. ) !And do you even know what mcr is?!!!11'
"Noo!Of corse not, Candi whats MCr?"I assked then why the hell did you say yes?
"A f^king emo band i f^king hate them!" oh yeah? Well, My Chemical Romance is amazing.
"Excuse me, are you guys talking about MCR?I heard Drako wanted to take you."said a stypid emo slytherine called pansy. Pansy is actually Einstein's daughter compared to you.
"Yeah, why the f^c do you care?"Candi shoted she only asked a question, jeez.
"Well i thought you might not fit in well with the of the other ppl at the concert, I mean lok at how ur dressed!'pansy said pointing at our cute cloths cute? you mean s!utty "I could help if you want."
"Fine."I siad bak and then we went into da slytherinies commen roam.
Pansy lent us sum clothes and i put mine were a skirt that had skulls on it and sum black fishnets wif rips nd sum conberse shoes and a black tank tup wit MCR on it yeah, because fishnets are sooo emo T_T . I started to puttput mah hare in a messy bun but ponsy stopped me.
"I ned to spray paint it black first!"she said and i gosped. LE GASP NUMBER THREE! Wait, did I say gasp? I meant: LE GOSP NUMBER THREE! much better.
"You are not painting my hare black!'i yeilied
"fin!I wil just put in sum streaks."she said bac
By eght I lookd fantastically emo I thought you just said emos were stupid? and went to the gret hal to meet draco with Candi, she loked emo as well she was wearing a leather mini dress and red fishnets and concerse shoes with black liggloss and blac hd did her haire black.
"Thank you Pansy,you are a life saver we would have looked so stypid without you."Candi sasid you look stupid either way, hon.
"I know!We could spell your name with a i so its pansi instead of Pansy." because that will definitely make her super cool.
Pansi Smiled at us"It was no probelm bye!'and she ran off
""Rite ready to go?I assed candi you assed candi? You sicko.
"Yup!"she said back and we walked sexily into the great hal. I thought you were going to Hogsmeade.
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I somehow came to know about this amazingly interesting story and I thought of reading some commentaries on it. I found yours... and you have no idea how much I laughed. XD I haven't had this kind of laugh in ages. Seriously. I can't even breathe, LOL. I read all the chapters and I am doubtful about my mind being at the right place. Sorry if I made any mistake writing this. I have kind of forgotten what English is. :D Oh gosh! I do hope I'm able to find my brain again. XD
I wish that it was longer. It's stupid but extremely funny. XD
I'm truly sorry, i try to never leave mean comments but this needed to be done. This story is awful. It was funny at first & i read a few more chapters cuz i thought maybe it would get better, but it didn't. This is truly a terrible story.
Two Things:
1 this girl is so f-ing funny and AWESOME...!
2 i read this whole story with bambi's voice sounding like LSP's from adventure time...O-O
i can tell you right off the bat, the original story isn't even worth laughing at anymore. I didn't know there were 50+ different characters through out the story! The girl needs read this story for herself. Too bad Danni_ isn't a member on Quibblo anymore..
i didn't really like the commentary. other than that it was pretty well written. i'm meaning no offence but she su cks at spelling, grammar, and other simple mechanics of writing.
This. Is. HILARIOUS!
Oh Soul, you make my day even when you're offline and I read your random stuff xD I love you!!!
I almost peed reading this! God this is funny!
omg has that girl even read harry potter