
Love is like a passionate kiss (Draco Malfoy love story)
I hope you enjoy my story! please comment and send instructive critism.
Chapter 1
character intro.
hello my name is Lily Hanson.
My birthday is June 6.
I am in griffindor house and currently in my 6th year.
I am average hight, have dark brown eyes and long hair that is also dark brown, I am also very skinny.
My birthday is June 6.
I am in griffindor house and currently in my 6th year.
I am average hight, have dark brown eyes and long hair that is also dark brown, I am also very skinny.
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Been a while since I read this lovely piece of writing Lily, but the newest chapters are absolutely awesome!!! The story is getting really intense and your writing has become incredibly strong since the first chapters were written. :) Keep up the awesome work Lil!!! Can't wait to see the rest of the chapters!!!
~Alice <3
Yay! Can't wait!! :3
Lily!! That was amazing!! Keep writing!!
Don't forget about Harry and all us. Hope we meet back up soon. ;)
~Alice
Lol, don't worry!! We will :)
The beginning would be better without so much dialogue, however, i know it's hard to keep the story moving without it.
OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZPLZPLZPLZPLZ write MORE!!!!!!!! this was TOTAL AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so much drama. so sad!!! but such a good story!
2 words
sorry lil.
oh 1 more
Nexties!!!
Chapter 16, near the bottom, you put henderson instead of Hanson
dang it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks Alice.
dang it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks Alice.
Just read the latest chapter. It's great so far, so keep it up.
thank you alice!! If you want me to add anything you know I will!
Hey don't just leave me hanging!! PLEASE PLEASE. PLEASE KEEP WRITING!¡!¡!¡!¡
i am dont worry im almost done!!
believe it or not... im now speechless.... hahaha :D