my poem :)
this is a poem that i writed
pleez read it
: )
Exclaimation piont
how
I'm
feeling
screaming
silent
just
!
!
!
!
i try to speak
but i cant say
the things i want to
so i stop
and
!
it builds inside
one day i will scream
hysterically
at you
all the things i never got to say
because it was not worth it
or was it?
(you will never understand.)
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fudge! #10 is freaking awesome! i put abeat 2 it and it sounded great! ur freaking awesome"!
How can something so little have such a big effect? I dnt knw! :)
You are such an awesome poet! :O you have so much talent! I love all of your poems! :D keep it up!
La la la la looooove it!!! =] You are amazingly talented!!! =]
cool! :)
Coool like 4real. Ur talented! Coming fm me it should be an honor haha jk but it should =P
I like the poem ~HER~ Its definitely my favorite!! Great job!! =)
sorry bout the double comment
lol i hate when that happpens
i really like "Her"
you just need to do the spacing better like in your first one the way it was put made me feel like william shatner wrote it. no offense just wanted to let you know!
i really like "Her"
you just need to do the spacing better like in your first one the way it was put made me feel like william shatner wrote it. no offense just wanted to let you know!
thankz for the advice i think ill try that ; )
william shatner is an actor