my first poem (please read)
this is a poem that i wrote and it means a lot 2 me :)
you said you will never hurt me
well that was a lie
how can i forgive you
when all you give me is pain
just like how water kills a fire
these tears of mine kill the burning passion i have for you
every time i hear your voice i flinch
waking up screaming because of you
what do you expect? for me to act like nothing happened
i don't regret meeting you i just regret falling for you
what do you expect? for me to fall in love with again
then you must be stupid becuz i am not letting that happen again!!!
well that was a lie
how can i forgive you
when all you give me is pain
just like how water kills a fire
these tears of mine kill the burning passion i have for you
every time i hear your voice i flinch
waking up screaming because of you
what do you expect? for me to act like nothing happened
i don't regret meeting you i just regret falling for you
what do you expect? for me to fall in love with again
then you must be stupid becuz i am not letting that happen again!!!
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love it
hye that was pretty cool
dat was a cool poem I might add my own poem.
this is awesome u should be a love poet =D
AWESOME!!!
hey that poem waz really good
i really like that one :)
that was really good, it reminds me a lot of something im going through right now, you should write more
Wow really good! Explains how I feel about aomeone right now.
wow, that is deep. It's awesome!