Dreams (Chapter 1)
***Character Descriptions so Far in the Story:
RHIANNON
-Beautiful long, smooth, curly locks of dark brown hair
-Deep blue eyes
-Prominent cheekbones
-Dark pink lips
-Thick eyebrows
-Long black eyelashes
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Chapter 1
She Awakens
Soft light played upon Rhiannon's light curly brown hair. Her blue eyes twinkled, but with worry and fear. She had just awoken from a nightmare, not that this was unusual.
Rhiannon was used to the horrible dreams, for she had had them for almost as long as she could remember. In fact, she could even wake herself if she wanted to during a dream.
But this dream...This dream was different. It had seemed almost as if it were real. And, she could wake up.
"How did that dream go again," she thought.
*****Recalling her dream****
Rhiannon stood in a dark room, but with just enough light so that she could see what surrounded her. White, yet faded, walls enclosed her. On these walls were runes of some sort painted in red.
This dried color of red she knew fairly well though. She knew the auroma that filled the room all to well. She knew the sound from the past of the victims screams...The certain color....----
That was when she heard it. The soft patter of footsteps rang in her ears..But from where?
There weren't any entrances or stairs. It wasn't coming from one particular direction either; maybe from above or below, or both.
The sound was getting louder by the second, so Rhiannon prepared herself and clenched her hands into fists and awakened her sences.
Then it spoke.
"Hello Rhiannon," it said calmy in his deep ancient voice.
"Who are you?!" Rhiannon yelled franticly.
A small chuckle sounded echoed throught the room and through her bones.
"I am the provider of life. I am the giver of death. I am the past, the present, and the future all at once. But, the real question is, who are you, Rhiannon?"
There was a very long pause.
"I--I am not sure," she said sadly, but with truth. "I am an orphan. I am a citizen of Sethleapoc. I--I am nothing else."
"But you are!" roared the deep voice, which suddenly got angry. "You fate is great! You must understand that you hold many destinies in your hands as we speak!"
"I don't understand though," she said on the verge of tears from the voice's anger.
"I know," said the voice calmly once more. "Which is why you must leave this place. When you awaken, leave forever. This land is keeping you powerless. Start a great journey to anywhere but here. Your own fate will guide you. We may or may not meet again. Do you understand?"
"Well, not really--"
"You need to. Afterall, I can change my mind and give your fate to someone else, and destroy your existanc---"
"Yes. I understand," Rhiannon moaned miserably.
"Excellent. Remember what I have said. Goodbye," the voice whispered.
Then the ground shook. Rhiannon fell over onto the floor boards, twisting her ankle.
She yelped in pain.
The vibration became more voilent.
Then another voice! ---Wait no! Thousands of voices-chanting, singing, screaming, laughing, taunting!
The runed on the walls glowed cherry red, getting brighter by the second.
Soon the whole walls themselves looked as if they were on fire. Rhiannon shouted out for help, withering in pain and agony, her eyesight fading away.
"Help me...help...me..." she whispered.
All of the sudden, the hundreds of runes all shot out beams of red light into the center of the room, right above where she lay.
The beams collected into a big ball of white light, which then projected a white beam of light into Rhiannon's heart.
The noises stopped, as did the vibrations. And there she layed in her hard hay bed.
Rhiannon was used to the horrible dreams, for she had had them for almost as long as she could remember. In fact, she could even wake herself if she wanted to during a dream.
But this dream...This dream was different. It had seemed almost as if it were real. And, she could wake up.
"How did that dream go again," she thought.
*****Recalling her dream****
Rhiannon stood in a dark room, but with just enough light so that she could see what surrounded her. White, yet faded, walls enclosed her. On these walls were runes of some sort painted in red.
This dried color of red she knew fairly well though. She knew the auroma that filled the room all to well. She knew the sound from the past of the victims screams...The certain color....----
That was when she heard it. The soft patter of footsteps rang in her ears..But from where?
There weren't any entrances or stairs. It wasn't coming from one particular direction either; maybe from above or below, or both.
The sound was getting louder by the second, so Rhiannon prepared herself and clenched her hands into fists and awakened her sences.
Then it spoke.
"Hello Rhiannon," it said calmy in his deep ancient voice.
"Who are you?!" Rhiannon yelled franticly.
A small chuckle sounded echoed throught the room and through her bones.
"I am the provider of life. I am the giver of death. I am the past, the present, and the future all at once. But, the real question is, who are you, Rhiannon?"
There was a very long pause.
"I--I am not sure," she said sadly, but with truth. "I am an orphan. I am a citizen of Sethleapoc. I--I am nothing else."
"But you are!" roared the deep voice, which suddenly got angry. "You fate is great! You must understand that you hold many destinies in your hands as we speak!"
"I don't understand though," she said on the verge of tears from the voice's anger.
"I know," said the voice calmly once more. "Which is why you must leave this place. When you awaken, leave forever. This land is keeping you powerless. Start a great journey to anywhere but here. Your own fate will guide you. We may or may not meet again. Do you understand?"
"Well, not really--"
"You need to. Afterall, I can change my mind and give your fate to someone else, and destroy your existanc---"
"Yes. I understand," Rhiannon moaned miserably.
"Excellent. Remember what I have said. Goodbye," the voice whispered.
Then the ground shook. Rhiannon fell over onto the floor boards, twisting her ankle.
She yelped in pain.
The vibration became more voilent.
Then another voice! ---Wait no! Thousands of voices-chanting, singing, screaming, laughing, taunting!
The runed on the walls glowed cherry red, getting brighter by the second.
Soon the whole walls themselves looked as if they were on fire. Rhiannon shouted out for help, withering in pain and agony, her eyesight fading away.
"Help me...help...me..." she whispered.
All of the sudden, the hundreds of runes all shot out beams of red light into the center of the room, right above where she lay.
The beams collected into a big ball of white light, which then projected a white beam of light into Rhiannon's heart.
The noises stopped, as did the vibrations. And there she layed in her hard hay bed.
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Actually, it's more like "I read your story and liked it and thought there was a common theme with mine, so people who read it might enjoy both." As opposed to "I don't care what you actually want to read, come over here and look at this because what I want is more important that what you do! K thx bye!"
ok i can respect that kind of thinking.
so is using fake tags to get your story attention though.
I think we all do some things that aren't the best.
well you gotta point, but still at mine isnt like going to a story and just skipping to the bottom write a comment with an implied message that goes something like,"Hi i could care less about ur story, but by the way, you should like totally read mine! K thx, bye!"
i think this is even better than some published books! you go girl!!!!
:O thx....i will re write it i think.... but until then read my new book: What was Once theirs is Now Ours
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you should definetly write more! you should get this published.
aww thx i am gonna quit it for a while tho and re write it in her perspective tho
It's really good so far!! Can't wait to see where it's going. Next chapter please!! (:
HOW DO YOU WRITE SO WELL?!?!?! GIVE YOUR TALENT TO SOMEONE WHO NEEDS IT WOMAN!!!!!!!
just kidding.
aww thx i will take that as a comliment!! :)
hey that's so fun
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I love love love it so far! next chapter puh-leeease! =D
thx i will get writing...i sure wish i could get more views tho so i could be in the most popular list..but that everyones dream isnt it? lol
OK chapter two is here!!!
Thanks everybody! I will be adding a new chapter very soon! I will put the new chapter with this story and I will make a new story which will be named Dreams (Chapter 2).... (for more views hopefully) so look for it! Thanks so much! :)