A dozen Roses
This is my first story so please leve me a message on wat u think so i can empr
i was worken at the flower store on monday when some dude that was about my age started hangen round the store. everytime someone came he would dissapear so i got called out to handle him.
i asked him if he wanted to by some flowers and if not to go away so he came in. as he was orderin he looked so nerves with me hanging arownd it wasnt till the train station that i found out why.........
i asked him if he wanted to by some flowers and if not to go away so he came in. as he was orderin he looked so nerves with me hanging arownd it wasnt till the train station that i found out why.........
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i agree with googlyeyes
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but keep going plz((((:
She seems dramatic..... and too much is happpening in too short of chapters add more detail
ditto that too
kk i will
I like it...keep going!!!! =D
kk it will
okay, umm, the story line is okay at first...except I think you guys need to learn how to spell...and the second part, so she passed out because this guy ran over her cat??? okayyy.....
i think this story better make a surprising turn soon....
ditto that
thanx
Sounds good so far