My Bleach Adventure

My Bleach Adventure

A story with me as the main character. Please tell me what you think and if you have to... criticize. But nicely plz.
Oh, and mainly girls might want to read this, only bcuz at some points it can be kinda "romantic/mushy" but guys can read it 2, i don't rly care.

Chapter 1

Chapter 1

My Bleach Adventure

Hi! My name is Kiara Hashinagi. I am 16 years old. Just last year I became a shinigami in order to protect the ones I loved from becoming hurt after my youngest sister was killed by a hollow. Here is my story from the moment I entered the Council Room to be tested.
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..."So therefore the Council has come to the decision that young Hashinagi will become a shinigami. And based on the display of talent that she has shown us, we have decided that she is to be moved to the 6th squad; as it is led by Byakuya Kuchiki. Congratulations Kiara-san."
I barely heard the Council member's congratulations as I left the room with my new squad captain, Kuchiki-san. I was in such a shock that I didn’t hear my new Captain speaking to me.
“…Hello? Hashinagi-san?”
“Huh? Oh, I’m sorry Captain.”
“You should know that unawareness is not usually tolerated in the 6th squad. But as it is probably a shock for you to be moved into such a high rank in such a short time, I will not punish you. But make sure that I do not see you staring off again when you’re on duty.”
“Yes, sir. I’m sorry, Kuchiki-taicho” (taicho means captain, in case you didn’t know)
Oh great. I thought after we had started walking again. Now he must think that I’m a total ditz! Ugh, note to self: PAY ATTENTION!
I didn’t notice Kuchiki-san watching me very intently. (The only reason that I know this is because ******** told me) I was so busy being wrapped up in my self-esteem killing mode that I crashed into Ichigo Kurosaki!
“Whoa! Hang on, there! Are you okay?” he asked me.
I blushed and mumbled, “Yeah. Thanks.” OMG! Ichigo Kurosaki in person…!
“You’re welcome. Hey Byakuya, is this the new recruit?”
Byakuya? Not Kuchiki-san? How well did they know each other?
“Yes, she is. Her name is Kiara Hashinagi.”
“Ah, Kiara-san then, right?”
Is he talking to me? “Um, yes. You’re Kurosaki Ichigo-san?”
“Yep, but you can just call me Ichigo.”
I was startled. “Ummm, Is Kurosaki-kun alright? It doesn’t feel natural to call someone with such strong spirit force like you by their name…”
sigh “That’s fine.”
What did he just sigh for? Did I offend him? Ugh, I’m so stupid.
“So… What do you think of this place Kiara-san?” Ichigo asked me.
“Ummm, It’s…” I took a really good look around me and that’s when I noticed how many buildings there really was. They were all so big and they looked very… what’s the word…graceful, delicate, and important, I suppose. I also took a glimpse of one of the most beautiful sunsets that I have seen in a long time.
“It’s beautiful! All of it, I mean. But, I haven’t really seen that much of this place yet.”
“Well, that can be quickly fixed then!” Ichigo said. “Hey, Byakuya? Do you mind if I take her on the tour of the Soul Society?”
“Well, I was supposed to, but I don’t think that there’s any harm in having you do it for me.”
“Alright, then! See you later!” Ichigo was already running along the hallway.
I looked at Kuchiki-san quizzically.
He replied, “Just run.”
And I did. “I’ll see you later, Captain Kuchiki!” I yelled after me, and waved.
I caught him waving just slightly back. Hee hee. I guess even Kuchiki-san has to give in to being nice sometimes. Even though he could have smiled too… Oh well. Now where did Ichigo disappear to-?
As I was in the middle of my thinking I ran around a corner, and someone grabbed my arm. I turned around and found myself staring into Ichigo’s eyes. I think my heart skipped a beat from shock.
“I-I was looking for you. Why did you run so fast?” I stammered.
“Oh, sorry. It’s just that Byakuya makes me nervous.”
“You didn’t seem all that nervous to me…”
“Shh!” Ichigo peeked his head around the corner then put his finger over my mouth.
“Mmm?”
I looked up at Ichigo and his eyes were filled with mischief.
“Act surprised!” he whispered.

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